Does anyone have a finish for this poem?

I remember everything you put me through.

I count the days it takes to get over you.

As I think about the times we shared,

I realize you never cared.

The hurt, the pains,

it all remains,

in my heart, you'll forever be.

All the hurt you put me through,

what you made me fall into,



I can't think of anything to finish it off. If you could give me an ending, or simply give me tips, that would be wonderful. Also, you can change it any way you want or need to.Thankyou.(:Does anyone have a finish for this poem?Were I you, I would do some rearranging and make it:





All the hurt you put me through,

what you made me fall into,

the hurt, the pains,

it all remains.

In my heart, you'll forever be.



And if you'd like to find a rhyme with %26quot;be%26quot;, go for it.
Does anyone have a finish for this poem?
I have to commend you for using rhymes in this free verse era slackers like to use. That makes you a non-slacker! LOL. I'd try to expand the lines to make them more uniform...not that they need to be, and make stanzas so it's easier to read, But that's just my style, and I could be full of it.



I remember everything you put me through.

As I count the days it takes to get over you.

When I think about the times we shared,

I realize through it all you never cared.



The hurt, your ego, your pride and pains,

Are fractured memories of what remains,

in my heart, you'll forever be in me.



All the hurt you put me through,

And what you made me fall into,

I have forgiven you, because I need to

To live again and feel my soul is free
Does anyone have a finish for this poem?
The crushing weight you left upon me

blinding me so I could not see

now the truth has filled my eyes

no longer can I empathize.

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